Question

假定你是某中學(xué)生英語報的小記者, 以下漫畫內(nèi)容是你的所見所聞,諳根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文投稿。

內(nèi)容要求：

1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容；    2.發(fā)表個人感想

注意：

1. 短文標(biāo)題與開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實、連貫

3. 詞數(shù)120左右;

4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

參考詞匯:告示牌sign

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a shame!

Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇以漫畫形式的作文，注意漫畫的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達法。

考點：考查綜合能力

點評：一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。