Question

昨晚，本市的一座辦公樓發(fā)生火災。假設你是一名校報記者，請根據以下提示用英語為校報寫一篇報道，介紹火災情況。
時間：昨晚9點
火情：1. 火焰夾雜黑色濃煙從六樓冒出
2. 有煤氣罐（gas tank）爆炸聲 (explosion)
3. 據說大火從一樓開始逐漸轉到樓頂
4. 一些窗戶和磚墻因為火災的高溫而倒塌
死亡：無死亡發(fā)生
救援：1. 許多消防隊員和消防車（ fire engines）迅速趕到
2. 花了近兩個小時才把火撲滅
注意：1. 有標題
2 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；      3. 詞數：120詞左右

Answer 1

A Terrible Fire
A big fire happened in one office building in our city at about nine o’clock last night.
In the beginning, we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the sixth floor; and we also heard the explosion of the gas tank. It was said that the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, and finally reached the top floor.
Some windows and brick walls were burnt down because of the heat of the fire. Many people stood outside on the streets watching the fire in horror. Many firemen and fore engines came quickly. Luckly, there was no person in the office building when the fire broke out. It took about two hours for the fireman to put out the big fire.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這篇作文的提綱很詳細，關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要根據所給要點，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】范文中用了詞組：burn down燒毀， because of因為，in horror.驚恐的，break out爆發(fā)， In the beginning,和一些復雜的句型： we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the sixth floor; and we also heard the explosion of the gas tank.這句話用了with復合結構。 It was said that the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, and finally reached the top floor.這句話用了固定句型It was said that和現在分詞做狀語， Luckly, there was no person in the office building when the fire broke out. 這句話用現在分詞做定語，It took about two hours for the fireman to put out the big fire.這句話用了it做形式主語。