Question

7．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last summer，my family made a trip to Qingdao，where is famous for its beautiful scenery．After a three？days sightseeing，we took a taxi to airport．But to our surprised，my mother couldn't find her handbag when we arrived at there．
Suddenly she realized that she has left her handbag in a drawer of the hotel room．
My dad made a phone call to the hotel to see how they could do for us．Luckily，
when knowing what was happened to us，the manager arranged his assistant to bring the handbag to the airport immediately．To our relief，he made it just after we boarded the plane．This special experience made our trip was unforgettable for it proves that kindness still exists in today's world．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了作者一次去青島旅行的經(jīng)歷，作者一家到機(jī)場(chǎng)才發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽的手包忘在了賓館，然后就給賓館打電話，讓他們欣慰的是，在他們登機(jī)之前賓館就派人把包送到了機(jī)場(chǎng)．這段經(jīng)歷使得他們的這次旅行非常難忘．

解答 Last summer，my family made a trip to Qingdao，where is famous for its beautiful scenery．
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After a three-dayssightseeing，we took a taxi to∧airport．But to our surprised，my mother
           three-day                                             the                              surprise
couldn't find her handbag when we arrived at there．Suddenly she realized that she hasleft her
                                                           去掉at                                                    had
handbag in a drawer of the hotel room．My dad made a phone call to the hotel to see how they     
                                                                                                                           what
could do for us．Luckily，when knowing what was happened to us，the manager arranged his
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assistant to bring the handbag to the airport immediately．To our relief，he made it just after
                                                                                                                                before
we boarded the plane．This special experience made our trip was unforgettable for it proves that
kindness still exists in today's world．proved

1．where改為which；考查關(guān)系詞，這里用關(guān)系代詞which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代Qingdao．
2．days 改為day；考查名詞，這是一個(gè)固定用法，當(dāng)中間有連字符時(shí)，名詞用單數(shù)．
3．a(chǎn)irport前面加the；考查冠詞，這里用定冠詞表示特指我們要去的那個(gè)機(jī)場(chǎng)．
4．surprised改為surprise；考查固定短語(yǔ)，to ones surprise是固定搭配，意為"讓某人感到吃驚的是"
5．去掉at；考查介詞的用法，there是副詞，前面不加介詞．
6．has改為had；考查時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，講的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，要用過(guò)去的時(shí)態(tài)．
7．how改為what；考查疑問(wèn)詞，how是意為副詞，表方式，what是疑問(wèn)代詞，在從句中作do的賓語(yǔ)．
8．去掉was；考查動(dòng)詞，happen意為"發(fā)生"，不能用于被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．
9．a(chǎn)fter改為before；考查介詞，根據(jù)句意應(yīng)是"在我們登機(jī)前"就把包送到了機(jī)場(chǎng)，所以用before．
10．proves改為proved；考查時(shí)態(tài)，短文講的是去年夏天發(fā)生的事情，所以用過(guò)去時(shí)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)要先整體閱讀短文，掌握短文的基本大意，在運(yùn)用所掌握的詞匯，語(yǔ)法，習(xí)慣短語(yǔ)等基本知識(shí)對(duì)每個(gè)句子詳細(xì)分析，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．