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《中學(xué)生》英語(yǔ)雜志“熱點(diǎn)”專(zhuān)欄2012年第2期的討論話(huà)題為“中學(xué)生是否該做兼職”，你對(duì)該話(huà)題很感興趣，并在班中進(jìn)行了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查�，F(xiàn)在你寫(xiě)信向該欄目投稿，介紹本次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的大致結(jié)果。信中包括如下要點(diǎn)：

(1)你班中同學(xué)做兼職的情況：全班62個(gè)學(xué)生中有近三分之二的人曾經(jīng)或正在從事餐館服務(wù)員、商店店員或圖書(shū)管理員等工作；

(2)這些同學(xué)選擇做兼職的原因：約一半的學(xué)生是為了幫助解決貧困家庭孩子經(jīng)濟(jì)問(wèn)題；另外一些人認(rèn)為可以學(xué)以致用并豐富社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；

(3)其他同學(xué)不做兼職工作的主要原因：高三學(xué)習(xí)壓力太大，沒(méi)有時(shí)間；兼職工作報(bào)酬低，或是父母不允許。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you the result of a survey I have done among my classmates on whether middle school students should do part-time jobs as it has also been a hot topic among us students．

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Yours sincerely,

Yang Li

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Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you the result of a survey I have done among my classmates on whether middle school students should do part-time jobs as it has also been a hot topic among us students．Nearly two-thirds of my 62 classmates has ever done or are doing part-time jobs, working as shop assistants, waiters in fast food restaurants or librarians．About half of them take up part-time jobs to help solve financial problems for their families．Others give up their leisure time because the jobs provide them with good chances to enrich their social experience and put what they have learned in class into practice．The other students do not do part-time jobs because under great pressure, students of senior three can not afford the time for the jobs which are poorly paid．Besides, their parents wouldn’t allow them to do that． Yours sincerely, Yang Li