Question

【題目】We often hear people complain about lack of opportunity. In fact, this world does not lack opportunity. But it does make a difference if we are able to grasp it.

For example, let’s suppose that Harvard University is recruiting(招收) students in China, and the requirement is that students must score above 640 for the Test of English as a Foreign Language(TOEFL) and 2,200 for the Graduate Record Examination(GRE) for admission to the university. Have you scored those scores? If you haven’t, you may feel regret, “I would have worked harder if I had known the requirements.”

When opportunity knocks, make sure your door isn’t locked. An able man will find opportunity everywhere, while a weak one will be left with only one opportunity, and that is to complain of having to prove what he is worth in this world.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1、以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2、以約120個(gè)詞就“機(jī)遇”這一話(huà)題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

(1) 你如何看待機(jī)遇？

(2) 我們?cè)鯓硬拍茏プ�機(jī)遇？

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1. 可以發(fā)表個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)；

2. 闡述觀(guān)點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí)，不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

3. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

4. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The author seems to believe we don’t lack opportunity in our lives. He informs us through an example that what need most is the courage and ability to grasp opportunity. (30 words)

Needless to say, opportunity plays a very important part in our lives when it comes to achieving success. To some extent, almost every success involves an element of opportunity. Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something. But opportunity doesn’t often come our way.

From my point of view, all that it takes is good preparation. As a popular saying goes, opportunity favors those who are prepared. Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the coming challenges, which are golden opportunities. However, if we don’t work hard, we can do nothing but regretfully let opportunity slip off our fingers.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于談看法的書(shū)面表達(dá)，根據(jù)提示信息的具體情況來(lái)行文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，簡(jiǎn)要概括短文，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、分析文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something.描寫(xiě)了一句中國(guó)諺語(yǔ)；Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the coming challenges, which are golden opportunities.采用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)plays a very important part，From my point of view等。使用連詞Needless to say，However使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。