Question

7．請用英語寫一篇100個詞左右的短文，記述一件發(fā)生在你身上（邊）的助人為樂的事跡．要求如下：
1．描述事情經(jīng)過；   2．談談你的感想．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們記述一件發(fā)生在身上（邊）的助人為樂的事跡，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，內(nèi)容要點包括：描述事情經(jīng)過；談談你的感想．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為描述事情經(jīng)過．第二部分為談談自己的感想．
重點短語與句型：
have difficulty in doing sth 做某事方面有困難
Much to my joy令我非常開心
be willing to do sth樂意做某事
高分句型一：Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors．此句用了過去分詞thrown作后置定語
高分句型二：Dog-tired as I was，I felt really happy此句adj+as+主謂，"盡管…"倒裝句

解答 Last Saturday，some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment．Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors．（高分句型一）He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items，especially cigarette butts．An idea struck me．Why not help him collect litter？Much to my joy，all my classmates agreed and were willing to help．So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish．Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman．（描述事情經(jīng)過）
      Dog-tired as I was，I felt really happy（高分句型二）．As the saying goes，helping hands are more sacred than praying lips．I truly believe we'd have a more harmonious society if everybody took action．What a fine deed!（談談自己的感想）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．