Question

假如你是李華，于11月12日到達(dá)紐約，然后去找你的美國朋友Tom，但他不在家。請按以下內(nèi)容給Tom留張便條。

1.火車晚點15分鐘，與接你的Tom錯過；

2.在火車上認(rèn)識的定居美國的華人夫婦Taylor把你帶到Tom家，Tom不在；

3.現(xiàn)在Taylor夫婦家；

4.務(wù)必今晚打電話給你64611128.

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom，

I’m in New York!＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

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　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　   　Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m in New York! It’s a really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule.

Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years. Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.

As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night. They are very friendly to me , so don’t worry about me. I’ll be all right. It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.

Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本作文是寫一張便條，所以要點一定不能遺漏，通過連詞要把要點連詞成句，連句成段，還可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。但不要寫的太多，因為寫得越多越容易出錯。最后不要忘了留電話號碼。