Question

越來越多的高中生利用假期打工。請你就此現象從不同的角度談談其中的利與弊（每項至少各三點）。（100字左右）
注意：段落開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數。請將你的短文完整地寫在答題卡上。
There are some advantages for high school students to work in holidays.
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Answer 1

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There are some advantages for high school students to work part time in holidays. Firstly, they can make some pocket money to buy what they want and thus develop a sense of independence. Secondly, they can make new friends and learn to solve all kinds of problems themselves to improve their social skills.
However, some disadvantages are still existing. The students may not have enough time to rest. Meanwhile, they might spend less time on their school work so they could fall behind their classmates. Besides, their parents will often worry about their safety when they work with strangers alone.

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