分析 這是一篇Email的書寫.從題文來看,這算是一篇敘事類的書面表達考生只需將內容精準無誤的翻譯出來就可以拿到基本分了,當然,正確的Email格式與漂亮的語句、高級的詞匯可為學生帶來更多的分.
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:本文將內容中的每個提示單獨分段,使得結構清晰.文中時態(tài)運用準確,介詞也群涌精準,例如came to,be praised for,is very strict with等,還有一些好的句子結構,比如With his help,we've made much progress 中with結構的運用,is not only our good teacher,but also our good friend 中not only..but also 句型結構的運用.
All these years he has been working very hard,and many times he has been praised for his good work.(高分句型一)
He is getting on well with us,but he is very strict with us.(高分句型二)
Mr.Li is not only our good teacher,but also our good friend.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Joan,
Our teacher,Mr.Li,is now nearly forty years old.He came to our school in 1986.All these years he has been working very hard,and many times he has been praised for his good work.(高分句型一)He has much knowledge and is good at teaching.All of us enjoy his lessons.They are lively and interesting.He is getting on well with us,but he is very strict with us.(高分句型二) He often encourages us to study hard.With his help,we've made much progress.Mr.Li is not only our good teacher,but also our good friend.(高分句型三)We all love and respect him.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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