Question

20．請根據(jù)如圖寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文．你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1．簡要描述圖畫內(nèi)容；
2．說明圖畫含義；
3．你的看法．
Birthday Celebration
As is shown in the picture above，___________________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 本文是看圖作文．從圖中我們可以看見爸爸媽媽在家準(zhǔn)備好給兒子過生日，而孩子卻在抱怨說："都什么年代了!還有誰在家過生日？"這反映了現(xiàn)在存在的一個(gè)社會現(xiàn)象：孩子過生日有一種攀比情況，很多學(xué)生過生日都去飯店請客，比較鋪張浪費(fèi)．一般看圖作文，出題者都要求學(xué)生描繪這幅畫的內(nèi)容，然后說出反映什么樣的社會現(xiàn)象，說明這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，以及自己的觀點(diǎn)．，這篇也不例外．我們可以分三段來寫，第一段描繪圖的內(nèi)容以及其反映的現(xiàn)象，第二段說明產(chǎn)生的原因，第三段寫自己的觀點(diǎn)．  
高分句式：Nowadays，like the boy in thepicture，many  teenagers think it becomesa fashion to celebrate their birthdays in the restaurants，receiving variousgifts from parents and friends．
當(dāng)今，像圖中的小男孩一樣，很多青少年認(rèn)為去餐館慶祝生日并從父母和朋友那接收禮物是一種時(shí)尚．句中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞receiving various gifts from parents and friends．作伴隨狀語．

解答 Birthday Celebration    
 As is shown in the picture，the parents have  prepared a special caketo show their love for their son on his birthday．Apparently，the son is not  satisfied，complaining："Who would have his birthday celebrated at home in this day and age？"，which really surprises them．
 Nowadays，like the boy in thepicture，many  teenagers think it becomesa fashion to celebrate their birthdays in the restaurants，receiving variousgifts from parents and friends．What‟s more，they can have fun by drinking，singing  and dancing．
    Personally，I think it can be done in amore  meaningful way．Birthday is much more than an occasion to receive gifts．It is also a time for us  to express thanks to our parents in return for  their love．

點(diǎn)評 要寫好英語的看圖作文首先，要根據(jù)題目所要求及畫面展示確定好題材與體裁．其次，要確定好行文的人稱與時(shí)態(tài)基調(diào)．再次，要在句與句以及段與段之間加一些表轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進(jìn)和因果等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞與過渡句，使文章前后照應(yīng)，行文流暢．寫作步驟如下：
第一段 簡述圖片內(nèi)容．As is shown in the picture，…，提出現(xiàn)象，闡述中心論點(diǎn)
第二段 分述自己的觀點(diǎn)，要有條理、用 first of all/in the first place，in the next place，last but notleast 等短語條理清晰，思路分明
第三段 重申主題號召或者呼吁等等