Question

15．第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)
假如你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Dave想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日"春節(jié)"，請你回復(fù)他的電子郵件，介紹"春節(jié)"及這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)．
1．它是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；
2．家人團(tuán)聚；
3．吃餃子、放焰火、走親訪友等其他活動(dòng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
春節(jié)the Spring Festival     放焰火set off fireworks
Dear Dave，
In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．
Dear Dave，
In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．As is known to all，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country．
Usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we will try to come home for the celebration．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast．Children have great fun in setting off fireworks．Parents take their kids to pay a visit to relatives or friends．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．
Hopefully，you will come to China to experience it．Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹春節(jié)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點(diǎn)明書信的主要內(nèi)容；二春節(jié)的活動(dòng)；三提出希望．
高分句型：
1．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast 句子里making dumplings and having a feast 做句子的伴隨狀語．make，have和主語all the family members 之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
在除夕夜，所有的家庭成員聚集在一起，包餃子，吃大餐．
2．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．句子里In addition to 表示"除此之外"；have a new tendency to 表示"有一個(gè)新的流行趨勢"．
除了傳統(tǒng)的活動(dòng)，人們有了一個(gè)新的流行趨勢，例如旅行，用微信發(fā)送祝愿．

解答 【答案】
Dear Dave，
   In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．As is known to all，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country．（點(diǎn)明書信的主要內(nèi)容）
   Usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we will try to come home for the celebration．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast．【高分句型一】Children have great fun in setting off fireworks．Parents take their kids to pay a visit to relatives or friends．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．【高分句型二】（春節(jié)的活動(dòng)）
   Hopefully，you will come to China to experience it．Looking forward to your early reply．（提出希望）
                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
雖然定語從句，名詞性從句，非謂語動(dòng)詞是高中的語法重點(diǎn)，在作文里運(yùn)用好了會(huì)提升作文的等級，但是如果平時(shí)都寫不對這樣的句子，那么在高考時(shí)如果強(qiáng)迫使用只能是畫蛇添足，反倒不如用簡單句．