Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯誤。每句中至多有兩處錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

John, a heavy smoker, once feel bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he turned to his doctor for help. “Quit smoking,” the doctor advised. Find the advice sensible from several points, such as money, healthy, and cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hour without a cigarette, John was nervous and had a difficulty in concentrating, inability to sleep, what made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to himself, “One more, I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable day of me to break away from the bad habit…” Then he picked up a cigarette which made her relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it “tomorrow”. Today John is still addicted for smoking.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】feel改為felt

【2】Find改為Finding

【3】healthy改為 health

【4】hour改為hours

【5】have a difficulty的a去掉

【6】what改為which

【7】(加and)I will quit it tomorrow.

【8】of改為for

【9】her改為him

【10】for改為to

【解析】

試題分析：文章介紹煙民John戒煙的過程，但最后還是沒戒掉。

【1】feel改為felt 考查時態(tài)。此文用過去時態(tài)描述，故將feel改為felt。

【2】Find改為Finding 考查非謂語動詞。此處不是句子，故用非謂語動詞，它的邏輯主語是John，兩者是主動關(guān)系，故將find改為finding，大寫。

【3】healthy改為 health 考查名詞和形容詞轉(zhuǎn)換。此處應(yīng)用名詞，故將healthy改為 health。

【4】hour改為hours考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。前面有several，故用復(fù)數(shù)，hours。

【5】have a difficulty的a去掉 考查冠詞。此處為固定搭配have difficulty in doing：做某事有困難。故去掉a。

【6】what改為which 考查關(guān)系代詞。此處為非限制性定語從句，指代前面整個句子，故用which。

【7】(加and)I will quit it tomorrow. 考查連接詞。此處為固定句型：祈使句/名詞（短語）+and/but/or/……+主句，前后部分之間是承接關(guān)系，故加一個and。

【8】of改為for 考查介詞。此處意為對我來說，故用for。

【9】her改為him 考查代詞。此處是指John，男的，故用him。

【10】for改為to考查介詞。addicted to是固定搭配，故改為to。