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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到英國高中生David登的一則啟事 ：希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言、文化。請你以李華的名義用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你怎樣得知David的愿望

(2) 你愿意成為他的朋友

(3) 你打算如何幫助他。

注意：(1)電子郵件的格式已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

(2)詞數(shù)：100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I've learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. I'm glad that you show such great interest in China and I would like to be your friend.

I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, I'll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?

I'm looking forward to your reply .

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，在寫這篇文章時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.整篇文章時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

2.要點(diǎn)要齊全，但是不要進(jìn)行簡單的羅列，可以采用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，或者是表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的副詞如What’s worse、In view of the above、First of all、Besides，使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。

3 .要列舉一下例子，最好用簡單句與復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法寫作如we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease。

4.多采用一些高級句型，如we’d better wear masks when we go outside，It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同時(shí)使用一些詞組如due to ， result from，get enough，build up等。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

提綱性文章難點(diǎn)：擴(kuò)充成句，因?yàn)樘峋V性文章主題內(nèi)容已經(jīng)基本列出，在將短句擴(kuò)充時(shí)，要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句是來表達(dá)，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，定語從句等，就如文中I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture句。再者就是要多使用一些高級詞匯與詞組，如文中l(wèi)ooking forward to，try my best to，have an opportunity to以及be glad that等。最后就是要段落清新，層次分明。就像文中要多使用一些連接詞語如Anyway、Besides等，使銜接自然。