【題目】假如你是李華,你的好友李娜要邀你一起去西藏旅行,但你得陪同父母去看望在鄉(xiāng)下的爺爺奶奶,所以不能去。請(qǐng)以電子郵件的形式給你的朋友提一下旅行建議。1.加入旅行社,同時(shí)結(jié)伴而行;2.早晚氣溫較低,帶上輕薄的棉衣; 3.日照時(shí)間長(zhǎng),帶上太陽(yáng)鏡,遮陽(yáng)帽等物品;4.空氣稀薄,戴上吸氧用具。(西藏Tibet 旅行社 travel agency 吸氧用具 Oxygen inhalation apparatus)

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【答案】Dear Li Na,

I feel sorry that I can’t go to travel to Tibet with you. In the holiday of May First, I need to go with my parents to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside.

As your best friend, I’d like to give you some advice about the Tibet journey. First of all, You’d better join a travel agency and travel with others. What’s more, don’t forget to take a light warm overcoat with you ,because the temperature in the morning and at night is too low in Tibet. In Addition, you should wear sunglasses or caps against the sun when you’re out of doors because of the long sunlight time. Most importantly, the air is thin and the air pressure is low, therefore, you should take an oxygen inhalation apparatus.

Anyway, I sincerely hope you can have a good time traveling to Tibet.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文,文章要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出,在寫這篇文章時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn):

1.整篇文章時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

2.要點(diǎn)要齊全,但是不要進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列,可以采用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,或者是表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的副詞如What’s worse、 Most importantly、First of all、Anyway,使上下文銜接自然,行文自然流暢。

3.此作最好用簡(jiǎn)單句與復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法寫作如 I need to go with my parents to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside。

4.多采用一些高級(jí)句型,如You’d better join a travel agency and travel with others等,同時(shí)使用一些詞組如because of,have a good time等。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

提綱性文章難點(diǎn):擴(kuò)充成句,因?yàn)樘峋V性文章主題內(nèi)容已經(jīng)基本列出,在將短句擴(kuò)充時(shí),要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句是來(lái)表達(dá),如強(qiáng)調(diào)句,定語(yǔ)從句等,就如文中 I need to go with my parents to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside。文章用What’s worse、 Most importantly、First of all這些連接詞,層層遞進(jìn),條理清晰,講出了對(duì)于作文主題的建議。最后用Anyway總結(jié),首尾呼應(yīng),文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊再者就是要多使用一些高級(jí)詞匯與詞組,如文中because of,have a good time等。最后就是段落清新,層次分明。

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