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增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
The other day，my parents and I drive to the country to have a picnic．It was the first time that we were driven by ourselves．We felt very excited and everything went smoothly．We had a great time．Besides，on our way back home，it began to rain．We felt a little frightened because that we were not familiar driving in the rain．What's worse，it was getting dark．We were getting desperate when the man and his wife volunteered to lead the way．Followed their car，we finally got to the city safe．I don't know them，but we will never forget the two kind stranger．

分析 本文為記敘文．前天，我和妻子去野餐，一路上很開心，但是在回來的路上，遭遇了大雨，而且天又黑，最后在兩個陌生人的幫助下安全到家．

解答 The other day，my parents and I drive to the country to have a picnic．It was the first time that we were driven by ourselves．We felt very excited and everything went smoothly．We had a great time．Besides，on our way back home，it began to rain．We felt a little frightened because that we were not familiar∧driving in the rain．What's worse，it was getting dark．We were getting desperate when the man and his wife volunteered to lead the way．Followed their car，we finally got to the city safe．I don't know them，but we will never forget the two kind stranger．
詳解：
1．drive改為drove 考察時態(tài)． 根據(jù)The other day意為前天，句子時態(tài)需用一般過去式．
2．were改為had 考生時態(tài)． 此句是一個固定句型It was the first time that sb had done sth．意為某人第一次做某事．
3．smoothly改為smooth 考察形容詞．go 此處為系動詞，后需加一個形容詞，go smooth意為進(jìn)展順利．
4．besides改為however 考察連接詞．根據(jù)上下文意思可知，此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折．
5．去掉that because引導(dǎo)一個原因狀語從句，此處that多于，沒有具體意思．
6．在familiar后加with 考察介詞． 此處考察一個固定短語，be familiar with 意為對…熟悉．
7．the改為a 考察冠詞．此處的man是第一次出現(xiàn)，也沒有確切指誰，所以用a表示泛指，意為一個男人．
8．followed改為following 考察非謂語． follow與主句的主語we之間是主動關(guān)系，所以用following．
9．safe改為safely 考察副詞．根據(jù)句意可知safely主要用來修飾got to the city，需用副詞形式．
10．strange改為strangers 考察名詞單復(fù)數(shù)． 從前文可，提到兩個人，所以需用復(fù)數(shù)形式．

點評 短文改錯主要考生學(xué)生對基礎(chǔ)知識在具體語境中的運用，平時要多積累一些相關(guān)的語法知識．

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D．It is far from beneficial for those academically inexperienced students．
69．The underlined word"indispensable"in Paragraph 4 probably meansB
A．common       B．necessary C．a(chǎn)vailable D．a(chǎn)bundant
70．What is the best title for the passage？C
A．College Lectures：Graduates or Undergraduates？
B．College Lectures：Advantages and Disadvantages
C．College Lectures：Continue or Not？
D．College Lectures：Today and Past．

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