Question

【題目】假定你是李華，針對近期福建省臺風頻發(fā)，你將為全班同學做一次主題為“如何防范臺風”的英語演講。請按以下提示寫一篇演講稿。

要點提示：

1、臺風給人們的生命和財產帶來損失。

2、防臺措施： （1）密切關注有關臺風的報道，及時采取防范措施；

（2）位于低洼地帶的人們，務必撤離以防洪澇；

（3）……

注意：

1. 詞數100左右，可以適當增加細節(jié)。

2. 信得開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

3. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名與學校。

參考詞匯： 財產 property； 低洼地帶 low-lying areas；

洪澇災害 flood disaster

Good afternoon, everyone,

I’m Li Hua, and it’s my honor to give a speech about typhoon prevention.______________

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I hope we can be less affected by typhoon in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone,

I’m Li Hua, and it’s my honor to give a speech about typhoon prevention. As we know, typhoon is one natural disaster that often occurs in our province. Every time it happens, it always results in heavy losses to people’s life and property. It is vital for us to learn how to protect ourselves from its damages.

Firstly, for typhoon, prevention is more important than any other measure. Therefore, before the coming of typhoon we are supposed to pay close attention to the reports about it and take preventive measures in advance. Secondly, the people living in the low-lying areas should leave there to protect themselves from the flood. Last but not least, when typhoon comes, we had better stay indoors and make sure that the doors and windows are closed tightly.

I hope we can be less affected by typhoon in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是李華，針對近期福建省臺風頻發(fā)，你將為全班同學做一次主題為“如何防范臺風”的英語演講。請按以下提示寫一篇演講稿。要點提示：1、臺風給人們的生命和財產帶來損失。2、防臺措施： （1）密切關注有關臺風的報道，及時采取防范措施；（2）位于低洼地帶的人們，務必撤離以防洪澇；（3）……寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數100左右，可以適當增加細節(jié)。2.信得開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。3.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名與學校。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇英文演講稿，采用三段式，內容齊全，結構嚴謹，布局合理，使用高級句子。As we know, typhoon is one natural disaster that often occurs in our province. As引導非限制性定語從句，that引導的限制性定語從句完美結合；Every time it happens, it always results in heavy losses to people’s life and property. Every time引導時間狀語從句；It is vital for us to learn how to protect ourselves from its damages.動詞不定式復合結構做真正主語；the people living in the low-lying areas should leave there to protect themselves from the flood.現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語；when typhoon comes, we had better stay indoors and make sure that the doors and windows are closed tightly.when引導時間狀語從句；另外，F(xiàn)irstly, Therefore, Secondly, Last but not least,的運用為文章增色添彩。