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5．目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象．某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是"My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations"．請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿．內(nèi)容要點如下：
主要原因：1．考試太多、偏難；2．不用功、懶惰；3．取悅父母．
個人看法：1．作弊不對，違反校規(guī)；2．要誠實；努力學(xué)習(xí)．3．其他看法．
注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．詞數(shù)：100左右．   參考詞匯：作弊cheat（v．）
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．                                              

Answer 1

分析 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁．本文是議論文． （2）構(gòu)思要點．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．
On the other hand，some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons．（高分句型一）
So when taking examinations，some students sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．（高分句型二）
What's more，we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations．（高分句型三）

解答 My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
    It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．
    As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．On the other hand，some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons．（高分句型一）So when taking examinations，some students sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．（高分句型二）（提出原因）
   In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations．What's more，we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations．（高分句型三）（個人看法）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．