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【題目】成語（Chinese idioms）是中國文化的重要組成部分，它能用簡單的詞語表達(dá)出豐富并且深刻的意義。假定你是李華，你的外國筆友James對中國成語很感興趣，向你咨詢有關(guān)中國成語的信息，請你寫一份回信，包括如下內(nèi)容：

1. 簡單介紹成語；

2. 學(xué)習(xí)成語的益處；

3. 分享自己學(xué)習(xí)成語的感受和體會。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear James,

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I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear James，

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms, mainly consisting of four or more Chinese characters, have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are a necessary part of Chinese culture. Benefits of learning them can be listed as follows.

First, with many of Chinese idioms frequently used in our daily life, a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese. Second, they usually possess vivid and deep meanings, making what you try to convey more convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I have a preference for the interesting stories behind some of the Chinese idioms. Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.

I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)文章可分三部分寫：第一部分先介紹一下中國成語；第二部分講述學(xué)習(xí)成語的益處；第三部分自己學(xué)習(xí)成語的感受和體會。寫作過程中要適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞讓文章更流暢；并注意運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子提升文章的檔次。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運(yùn)用了非謂語動詞making what you try to convey more convincing.狀語從句because they are a necessary part of Chinese culture.定語從句which helps me a lot、appeal to、absorbed in、a good knowledge of、contributes to、not only…but also等詞匯及First, Second, As far as I am concerned等連接詞。