Question

9．認(rèn)真觀察以下三幅圖片，然后選擇其中的一幅圖片寫一篇作文．請你詳細(xì)描述所選圖片內(nèi)容，然后針對圖片內(nèi)容表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述看法和理由．
注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)你本人的姓名、班級及學(xué)校等真實(shí)信息．

Answer 1

分析 本篇圖畫作文分為三幅，前兩幅都是講合作團(tuán)結(jié)的重要性，第三幅是講不同角度看待問題會有不同的答案．考生應(yīng)該選擇自己最有話可寫的一幅入手，按照要求，先描述畫面內(nèi)容，再提出自己的觀點(diǎn)．要注意應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
重要短語：
 as is depicted，正如..所描述的那樣，keep in step with，與…保持一致，in short，簡而言之．
高分句子：
1．However，it is obvious that people can not do this alone．本句中含有重要句型 it is obvious that，…很明顯．
2．Clearly，it was the cooperation through which we won the victory over the earthquake．本句為明顯的強(qiáng)調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)，it was…which…

解答 As is depicted in the first cartoon．The three people go throush the the broken bridge successfully when they together．（描述圖畫） However，it is obvious that people can not do this alone．（高分句型）The picture really sets me thinking．It manifests the importance of cooperation and the necessity of keeping in step with each other．
    There are a lot of examples to illustrate the issue．The most obvious one is the case with war on earthquake in 2008．（舉出例子）At that time the whole country was plagued by earthquake．But led by our government，people from all walks of life in the society were mobilized and united as one．Clearly，it was the cooperation through which we won the victory over the earthquake．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，the dependence of people on one another has now increased，without which the society we live in cannot keep going smoothly．In short，cooperation has become a driving force for the development of our country．（提出自己觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 看圖作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．