Question

上周日，你班開展以“美化城市環(huán)境，倡導(dǎo)低碳生活”為宗旨的志愿者活動(dòng)。活動(dòng)內(nèi)容包括：上午去郊區(qū)植樹；下午去廣場宣傳，分發(fā)傳單。請你就這個(gè)活動(dòng)為校報(bào)寫一篇120個(gè)左右詞的短文。

你的文章應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1、 活動(dòng)宗旨，內(nèi)容及其對同學(xué)的影響；

2、 你的評(píng)論。

注意：1．文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。

2．參考詞匯：低碳生活 a low-carbon lifestyle 傳單leaflet郊區(qū)suburb

A voluntary activity

Last Sunday, our class launched a voluntary activity.

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Answer 1

【答案】

                            A voluntary activity

Last Sunday, our class launched a voluntary activity. Its theme is to make the city more beautiful and advocate a low-carbon lifestyle. In the morning, we went to plant trees in the suburbs. We worked in cooperation. Some dug holes, some carried and planted trees, and some watered them. In the afternoon, we went to People’s Square to hand out leaflets, raising people’s awareness of environmental protection. Most of the students think highly of the activity, which will surely produce a positive effect on their daily life.

As far as I’m concerned, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. As long as there is the possibility of saving our planet, take action now before it is too late. Low carbon living is surely a way of great significance.（120詞）

【解析】

試題分析：

本文屬于半開放性的作文，本次志愿者活動(dòng)的話題為“美化城市環(huán)境，倡導(dǎo)低碳生活”要求。活動(dòng)的宗旨可以從提高人民的環(huán)保意識(shí)，增強(qiáng)環(huán)保理念。讓每個(gè)人都成為環(huán)境保護(hù)的主力軍。活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容為：：上午去郊區(qū)植樹；下午去廣場宣傳，分發(fā)傳單。對同學(xué)的影響可以從他們對環(huán)境保護(hù)的意識(shí)有所增強(qiáng)，這方面的知識(shí)也有所增加。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于半開放性作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。