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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處;每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dormitory life is part of college life. But sometime the harmony in the dormitory is disturbed in one way or another. What is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefit all the members. On one hand you can have a good rest and put your hearts into study. On the other hand, you will have a good mood and enjoy being together. There are several ways create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoyed situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other or co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make the good friends.

On conclusion, you should try your best to build a harmonious dormitory life for our college life.

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【解析】考查副詞。句意：但是有時候宿舍里的和諧被以某種方式擾亂。sometimes“有時候”；sometime“某個時刻”。根據(jù)語境，故將sometime改為sometimes。

考查連詞。As引導定語從句，指代整個主句“a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefit all the members.”，從句中作主語，what不能引導定語從。故將What改為As。

考查主謂一致。主語是“a harmonious dormitory life”，是第三人稱單數(shù)，根據(jù)語境，句子用一般現(xiàn)在時。故將benefit改為benefits。

考查名詞。句意：一方面你可以好好休息并且全心全意地學習。put one's heart into“全心全意做某事”是固定短語，故將hearts改為heart。

考查不定式。way to do sth.“做某事的方式”，to是不定式符號，不定式短語“to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life”作定語修飾way。故create前加to。

考查形容詞。-ing形式的形容詞，表示被修飾語的特征，-ed形式的形容詞表示被修飾語的特征。句意：當一種令人煩惱的情況出現(xiàn)時，你必須學會彼此容忍和共存。表示situation的特征用annoying。故將annoyed改為annoying。

考查連詞。句意：當一種令人煩惱的情況出現(xiàn)時，你必須學會彼此容忍和共存。根據(jù)語境可知，前后文是并列關系。故將or改為and。

考查冠詞。句意：第三，你們必須彼此共享和做好朋友。根據(jù)語境，此處表示泛指不是特指。故去掉good前的the。

考查介詞。in conclusion“總之”是固定短語。故將On改為In。

考查代詞。句意：總之，你應該竭盡全力為你的大學生活建立和諧的宿舍生活。由上文的you推斷，形容詞性物主代詞用your。故將our改為your。