Question

Optimism（樂觀）always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism（悲觀）, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure．That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenges and disappointments in very different ways．

注意：1．無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

2．除詩歌之外，文體不限；

3．內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例；

4．文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；詞數(shù)不少于120左右。

Answer 1

Optimism is important in all aspects of our life．If you can change your mind from pessimism, you can change your life．

Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two, I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself．I kept practicing speaking, listening, reading and writing．When I was fed up with reading or writing, I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories, jokes and humors or seeing English films．When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing, I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs．By this means, I always made myself cheerful and optimistic, full of splendid and colorful dreams of future．I kept practicing．Gradually, I made progress in my English．．

Thanks to the optimism, I have become one of the top students in my class by now．

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于話題類作文，根據(jù)提示信息和要求行文。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照夾敘夾議的方式來寫3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和過去時(shí)連用。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如運(yùn)用條件狀語從句：If you can change your mind from pessimism, you can change your life；使用強(qiáng)調(diào)：I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself；運(yùn)用時(shí)間狀語從句：When I was fed up with reading or writing, I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories, jokes and humors or seeing English films．When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing, I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs．等。此外，文章還使用了大量短語in all aspects of，Up to the beginning of，give in，keep doing，be fed up with，have some trouble in，By this means等使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

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