Question

近年來(lái)，住房問(wèn)題已經(jīng)成為媒體關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，如何解決住房問(wèn)題是許多大城市面臨的最嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題之一，針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，人們想出了許多解決的辦法，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，具體解決方法如下;

多建高層建筑，可容納更多的人

向地下發(fā)展

在郊區(qū)建房子，擴(kuò)大城市規(guī)模，減輕城市人口壓力

政府積極出臺(tái)相應(yīng)政策，防止房?jī)r(jià)過(guò)高

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120左右；

2．要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文流暢

3. 標(biāo)題已給出

參考詞匯：高層建筑—  high-rise apartment         郊區(qū)- suburb

The House Problem in Big Cities

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years more and more people in big cities complain that they can’t afford an apartment, People come up with many ideas to solve this problem.

The first suggestion is building more high-rise apartments which can hold more people in the same area. Some people suggested developing underground housing areas which costs less. Besides, it is a good way to build house in suburbs, thus enlarging the scale of cities and reducing the crowdness of cities. Moreover, people are expecting the government to take efficient measures to control the house price.

Anyway, I hope the housing problem will be solved properly in the near future so that more people in big cities will have their own house.

 

【解析】

試題分析：提綱式作文。作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中主要有三個(gè)方面，一是內(nèi)容，本題目?jī)?nèi)容題示較多，重點(diǎn)展示解決住房問(wèn)題的方法，提示了四個(gè)方面，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不可提綱式翻譯，可適當(dāng)調(diào)整位置以及主次要分明，二是復(fù)雜的句型和高級(jí)詞匯，要注意對(duì)復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)如倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)等的運(yùn)用。三是句子，段落之間的銜接。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】作為高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的說(shuō)明有這么一條，在高考作文中要盡量使用高考詞匯和復(fù)雜句型，Besides, it is a good way to build house in suburbs, thus enlarging the scale of cities and reducing the crowdness of cities.本句中巧妙的使用了It is +adj+to do 固定句型以及thus doing結(jié)構(gòu)，使語(yǔ)言豐富。

結(jié)尾表達(dá)了作者的希望運(yùn)用了目的狀語(yǔ)從句。

【考點(diǎn)】考查語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。