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16．假定你是李華，你從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知英國曼徹斯特市"2018中國文化年"組委會在中國招募志愿者，請你寫一封申請信參加，要點包括：
1．自身情況（英語能力等）；
2．工作能力（對中國文化非常了解等）；
3．希望獲準．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不算入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior high school student in China．Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
I believe I am qualified and suitable to be one of the volunteers．To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）I once worked as a volunteer in similar activities held in Beijing，so I have relevant working experience．In addition，I'm outgoing and always ready to help others．Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）
In brief，I am sure I can meet your requirements．I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知英國曼徹斯特市"2018中國文化年"組委會在中國招募志愿者，請你寫一封申請信參加，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：自身情況（英語能力等）；工作能力（對中國文化非常了解等）；希望獲準．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：apply to 申請做某事；To begin with首先；more than超過；Most importantly更重要的是；In brief簡而言之；take my application into consideration考慮我的申請書；In addition另外；
Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）
Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I'm Li Hua，a senior high school student in China．Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
       I believe I am qualified and suitable to be one of the volunteers．To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）I once worked as a volunteer in similar activities held in Beijing，so I have relevant working experience．In addition，I'm outgoing and always ready to help others．Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）
       In brief，I am sure I can meet your requirements．I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration．
       I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．