Question

假如你是李華，是一名高一學(xué)生，最近聽同學(xué)說哈九中國(guó)際部在招生，你想申請(qǐng)去哈九中國(guó)際部學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給哈九中國(guó)際部寫一封信咨詢以下問題：
1．申請(qǐng)需要具備哪些條件；
2．是否需要入學(xué)考試及以后的課程安排；
3．費(fèi)用問題(是否包括食宿和教材)。
注意：可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫。詞數(shù)100左右。
參考詞匯：  國(guó)際部  International department       
Dear Sir/Madam,
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sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

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Dear Sir/Madam,      
I am a student who wishes to study abroad. And I learn that the International Department in your school will offer the opportunity for students like me, so I write to inquire about it.
　　First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your school? I am now a student in High School, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, is it necessary for me to take an examination for the enrollment? In addition, I want to learn more about the arrangement with regards to academic schedule. At last, it is not clear how much the tuition fees are. Do the fees include the accommodation or the books?
I’m looking forward to your reply, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to response to me.
sincerely yours,
LiHua

試題分析：信屬于應(yīng)用文，是考生比較熟悉的格式�？忌�首先要仔細(xì)審題，包括以下幾個(gè)方面：一分清段落。二是注意口氣，因?yàn)檫@是咨詢信，語(yǔ)氣要中肯。三是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全。注意對(duì)于咨詢信最后要感謝對(duì)方的答復(fù)。考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：作文要層次清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)流暢，切合作文要求，語(yǔ)氣誠(chéng)懇。文中使用一些極佳的詞語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色，使用高級(jí)詞匯及句型。