Question

科學(xué)技術(shù)在日新月異地發(fā)展，它們在人們生活中的應(yīng)用越來越廣泛，但是也帶來了一些問題。結(jié)合下面的圖畫，談?wù)効茖W(xué)技術(shù)給人們造成的影響。

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1．詞數(shù)：100—120詞左右。

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From the above pictures, we can see the following scene.

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Form the above pictures, we can see the following scene: in the past when father came back from work and stepped into the house, his wife would bring him a cup of hot coffee and his little son used to happily greet him with “Daddy”, and his daughter would throw away her book to welcome him, which made him glad and also “Hi” to them happily.

But now when father gets home, he finds that his son is addicted to playing computer games and his daughter is busy phoning her friends and his wife is absorbed in watching TV series. Everyone is doing something and cares nothing about his return. The father doesn’t become angry because he is also dealing with his business with a cell phone.

What the pictures reflect is that the wide use of technology is beginning to influence the relationship between family members, who seem to have no time communicating with each other.

解析:

本文應(yīng)包括以下寫作要點(diǎn)：

1．本文的命題形式我漢語提示和兩幅圖畫，夾敘夾議。

2．確定第一幅圖用一般過去時，第二幅圖用一般現(xiàn)在時。用第三人稱敘述。

3．第一幅圖的內(nèi)容：過去爸爸下班回家的時候，媽媽遞上一杯熱咖啡，兒子高興地喊“爸爸”，女兒放下手頭的書也問候爸爸。

4．第二幅圖的內(nèi)容：現(xiàn)在爸爸下班回家的時候，兒子沉迷于上網(wǎng)玩游戲，女兒在煲電話粥，媽媽在看電視劇，而爸爸自己也在邊走邊用手機(jī)和人通電話。