Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position among China’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 rich people.

Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introduced to the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in a tour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang.

Answer 1

【答案】1. his→whose

2. owned→owns

3. rich→richest

4. Fought→Fighting

5. 去掉in

6. he和introduced 之間加上was

7. before→when/after

8. in→ on

9. obvious→obviously

10. all→ both

【解析】1. 構造的非限制性定語從句中用關系代詞whose，指代上文 Jack Ma的。故his→whose。

2. 考察時態(tài)。'馬云擁有這21.1億中的百分之六'，是客觀事實，所以用一般現在時第三人稱單數。故owned→owns。

3.句意：但是他仍然在世界10大富翁之外。這里應該用最高級，表示世界上最富有的10個人，故rich→richest。

4. 現在分詞作狀語，動詞fight和主語 Ma是主動關系。故Fought→Fighting。

5. 關系代詞which指代先行詞a translation agency，在定語從句中做主語，故去掉in。

6. 主語he和動詞introduce是被動關系。故he和introduced 之間加上was。

7. 句意：當他偶然地被任命帶美國游客 Jerry Yang參觀長城時/之后，他的命運注定要改變。根據句意可知before→when/after。

8. 考察固定搭配。take sb on a tour 帶某人去參觀。故in→ on。

9. 句意：很明顯這次會面對于他們都是轉折點。這里應該用副詞obviously修飾句子。故obvious→obviously。

10. 句意：很明顯這次會面對于他們兩位都是轉折點。根據上文可知是兩個人見面，代詞應該用both，故all→ both。