Question

8．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)李津，你的美國(guó)筆友John發(fā)來(lái)郵件，他對(duì)天津流行的一種共享單 車"mobike"很感興趣，并希望你能簡(jiǎn)單介紹．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給John寫一封回信． 要點(diǎn)包括：
1．使用方便（APP査看車輛，掃二維碼開鎖）
2．容易找到 便于存車
3．其它優(yōu)點(diǎn)（該部分內(nèi)容自擬至少兩點(diǎn)）
注意：短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100詞
參考詞匯：
             智能手機(jī) smart phone 
              掃二維碼  scan the QR Code
Dear John，
I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a smart phone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．你要做的是通過(guò)APP找到最近MOBIKE、掃描QR碼在自行車上，享受您的旅行．What you do 是一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句，從句中缺少賓語(yǔ)，用what來(lái)引導(dǎo)．what在從句中做賓語(yǔ)．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．作為一種交通工具，它不僅緩解了交通壓力，而且對(duì)環(huán)境也有好處．這是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代前面整個(gè)句子的內(nèi)容，在從句中做主語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear John，
     I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
     It's very convenient to use if you have a smart phone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）
     Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Jin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．