安全對每個人都很重要。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。

提示:1. 體育鍛煉;2. 上下樓梯;3. 交朋結(jié)友;4. 食品衛(wèi)生。

要求:

1. 語句通順,表達準確,內(nèi)容連貫。

2. 詞數(shù):100--150詞;短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students

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① Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.

②Firstly, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. ③At school, we almost take exercise every day to keep us fit, but before we have such sports as swimming, running, we should make full preparations for them in case some accidents happen.

④Secondly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should walk along the right, and walk slowly.

⑤ As for making friends, especially some Internet friends, keep it in mind that we shouldn’t tell them our personal information. ⑥ Most importantly, we shouldn’t go to meet them alone. ⑦ Last but not least, we had better say no to the junk food, which does great harm to our health.

⑧Only when we keep all these safety rules in mind, can we enjoy a better school life.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求根據(jù)提示寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語短文。寫作要點包括:體育鍛煉;上下樓梯;交朋結(jié)友;食品衛(wèi)生等三個方面。詞數(shù)在100-150詞左右,開頭不計入總詞數(shù);不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明:范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點,進行了適當?shù)耐卣,并注意語句的連貫性;范文還使用了定語從句、時間狀語從句、賓語從句、倒裝句等語法知識,具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面:時間狀語從句①while we are having sports,②before we have such sports as swimming,③when we go upstairs or downstairs;賓語從句keep it in mind that we shouldn’t tell them our personal information;非限制性定語從句which does great harm to our health;倒裝句Only when we keep all these safety rules in mind, can we enjoy a better school life.等,語法知識運用嫻熟,顯示了較強的語法功底,也使作文句式變得多樣;

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用firstly, at school, secondly, as for, most importantly, last but not least等來銜接句子和段落,使表達變得更有條理;

短語和搭配方面:范文使用了get injured, take care, take exercise, make full preparations for, keep fit, in case, make friends, had better等短語和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實。

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