Question

5．假如你叫王平，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Smith，
How are you？How time flies!Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again．
                                                                  
Yours，
Wang Ping．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫類的寫作，要求考生按圖片所示向筆友介紹寒假生活．要仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫的畫面，按照圖意寫作．并且寫作時(shí)注意句子的銜接，適當(dāng)使用連詞．同時(shí)考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般過去時(shí)為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
 work out，解決，In a word，總之
高分句子：
1．It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties，as it is a traditional custom in China．本句含有重要句式 it takes sb．sometime to do，花費(fèi)某人時(shí)間做某事．
2．a(chǎn)nd everything that helped to recover my energy．此句that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾everything．

解答 Dear Smith，
    How are you？How time flies!Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again．（問候）
    We had 20 days in all for the holiday，during which we had the most important Chinese Festival-the Spring Festival．It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties，as it is a traditional custom in China．（高分句型）Of course，I spent most of the time doing my lessons．As you know，I will take the National Examinations in June and it's only a few months away．Every day I did some English reading，practiced writing compositions，worked out a number of science problems and so on．When I got tired，I would do something to relax myself，like playing basketball with my friends，listening to music，surfing the Internet，playing games，and everything that helped to recover my energy．
（描述寒假生活）
    In a word，I had a full，busy and wonderful holiday．How about you？I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．（期待回信）
Yours，
Wang Ping

點(diǎn)評 在完成圖表作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，