Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

When I was a teenager, I got lost in a foreign country. I was in Berlin, Germany, only month-long trip in Europe. My team and I had one night there to spend however we pleased. Most of my teammates decided to stay indoors and relax. But I did not want to pass up the chance to explore Berlin.

I visited lots of major attractions around the city that night. When the exhaustion began to set in, I checked the time on my watch. I was surprised to see that it was two o’clock in the morning.

As I walked to a subway station, I realized that it was my dad’s birthday. This would be the first birthday I couldn’t celebrate with him because he died a few months earlier. Before I could begin thinking of my dad, I heard train wheels stop.

I rushed onto the train. At first, I was thankful to have made it onto the train. But that joy quickly turned to panic when I noticed that the train was heading in the wrong direction!

I looked around the nearly empty train. I saw a young woman sitting quietly by the window and approached her.

“Hi, do you speak English? I’m lost. Can you help me?” I asked.

The woman understood. She told me how to return to where I had first gotten on the train. But my anxious mind couldn’t follow her guidance.

Without thinking, I asked, “Can you come with me?”

Her face froze at my stupid request. After a long second of hesitation, she agreed to help me. At that moment, I was grateful for the kindness from a stranger.

注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；

2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Paragraph 1:

On the journey back to the train station I got on, she and I chatted.

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Paragraph 2:

Finally, we reached my stop.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

On the journey back to the train station I got on, she and I chatted. Curiously, I asked her if she wasn't worried that I was the bad guy. She surprised me by saying that bad people are not so polite. Yes, my father always taught me to be polite, and I have tried my best to be a kind person all my life.

Paragraph 2:

Finally, we reached my stop. I thanked her and asked where she was going. She answered that she was going to visit her sick father. I smiled. I knew her father must be waiting for her. Somehow, I suddenly said to her out of blue, “He must have a happy day”. After all, every moment of having children around is a happy day for parents.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者在國(guó)外迷了路，作者凌晨?jī)牲c(diǎn)鐘走到地鐵站時(shí)，意識(shí)到今天是爸爸的生日。這將是作者第一次不能和他一起慶祝生日，因?yàn)樗麕讉�(gè)月前就去世了。作者在火車上遇到一個(gè)陌生女子，女子答應(yīng)帶他回到第一次坐火車的地方。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：在回火車站的路上，我和她聊了起來(lái)。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述他們?cè)谲嚿狭奶斓膱?chǎng)景，談話的內(nèi)容等。第二段開頭是：最后，我們到達(dá)了我的車站。本段應(yīng)該寫作者和陌生女子的告別內(nèi)容，作者了解到女子是去看望生病的父親，于是說(shuō)女子的父親今天一定是快樂的一天，畢竟有孩子在身邊的每一刻對(duì)父母來(lái)說(shuō)都是快樂的一天。

注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。