Question

13．第二節(jié) 書面表達
假定你是某中學英文報編輯李華，學校將舉行一次50周年校慶作品展示（exhibition），請你用英文寫一則作品征集啟事．要點如下：
1．作品主題：反映校園生活，表達祝福；
2．作品形式：詩詞、照片、畫作等；
3．截止日期：9月1日．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
With the 50^th anniversary of our school approachingwe are going to hold an exhibition in its honor．We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday．
We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you．Besides，you can write Chinese poems，sharing your sweet experiences of school life．Paintings are also preferred．Whatever your works are，they will show your talents on such a special occasion．More importantly，it is a good opportunity to extend your best wishes to the school as well as display your colorful school life．Please send in your works before September 1^st．
We really appreciate everyone's active participation．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息用英文寫一則作品征集啟事，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：作品主題：反映校園生活，表達祝福；作品形式：詩詞、照片、畫作等；截止日期：9月1日．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：hold an exhibition舉行展覽；leave a deep impression on留下深刻印象；Besides另外；More importantly更重要的是；as well as也，還；
We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday．（高分句型一）
We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you．（高分句型二）
Whatever your works are，they will show your talents on such a special occasion．（高分句型三）

解答 One possible version：
      With the 50^th anniversary of our school approaching，we are going to hold an exhibition in its honor．We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday．（高分句型一）
     We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you．（高分句型二）Besides，you can write Chinese poems，sharing your sweet experiences of school life．Paintings are also preferred．Whatever your works are，they will show your talents on such a special occasion．（高分句型三）More importantly，it is a good opportunity to extend your best wishes to the school as well as display your colorful school life．Please send in your works before September 1^st．
     We really appreciate everyone's active participation．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．