Question

8．假設(shè)你是李津，你的初中同學(xué)阿飛寫信告訴你他現(xiàn)在英語寫作成績不好，所以很焦慮，請回信給他一些鼓勵和建議，內(nèi)容包括：
1．不要焦慮，不要失去信心；
2．給他幾點建議；
3．相信他一定能學(xué)好英語．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于100；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear He Fei，
Dear He Fei，
I've received your letter and deeply understand how you feel now．However，don't be disappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who finds it difficult to write well．I suppose the following suggestions might be of some help to you．
To begin with，it is essential to memorize some words，phrases as well as sentence structures，because they are the basis of language learning，just like bricks in a building．Additionally，read English articlesuch as possible and recite the good ones so that you may know how to put them to use whenever possible．Last but not least，keep in mind that there are many things that can't be learnt immediately，so never be frustrated when you fail in one or two exams．
Anyway，just keep going with a strong belief that you can improve your written Englishas long as you never give up．Just as the saying goes："Practice makes perfect．"
Yours
LiJin．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點句型一：However，don't be  disappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who finds it difficult to  write well．然而，不要失望，甚至懷疑自己，因為你不是唯一一個覺得寫不好的人．本句中who finds it difficult to  write well是一個定語從句，修飾the only one．
亮點句型二：Additionally，read English articlesuch as possible and recite the good ones so that you may know how to put them to use whenever possible．此外，盡可能地閱讀英語文章和背誦好的文章，以便你可以知道如何使用它們．本句中so that 引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語從句．

解答 Dear He Fei，
    I've received your letter and deeply understand how you feel now．However，don't be  disappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who finds it difficult to  write well．（亮點句型一）I suppose the following suggestions might be of some help to you．
    To begin with，it is essential to memorize some words，phrases as well as sentence  structures，because they are the basis of language learning，just like bricks in a building．Additionally，read English articlesuch as possible and recite the good ones so that you may know how to put them to use whenever possible．（亮點句型二）Last but not least，keep in mind that  there are many things that can't be learnt immediately，so never be frustrated when you fail  in one or two exams．
    Anyway，just keep going with a strong belief that you can improve your written English as long as you never give up．Just as the saying goes："Practice makes perfect．"
  Yours
LiJin

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．