Question

請根據以下信息寫一篇英語短文，簡單描述一下2014年云南省魯甸縣地震。

1. 地震于2014年8月3日發(fā)生在云南省魯甸縣；

2. 震后發(fā)生火災和泥石流；

3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，馬路出現裂痕，水電供應中斷；

4. 有些建筑物里的水管爆裂開來，地上一些洞穴冒出了蒸汽；

5. 地震共造成617人死亡；112人失蹤，3143人受傷，還有很多無家可歸者；

6. 震后解放軍戰(zhàn)士提供救助：提供食品和水，搭建避難所。

要求:

1. 短文必須包括要點中的所有內容；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使內容連貫；

3. 參考詞匯：泥石流mud-rock flow 縣county

4. 詞數:120左右。

Answer 1

On August 3rd ,2014 a big earthquake hit Rudian County Yunnang Province. After the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end, because there were fires and mud-rock flow. Houses and tall buildings fell down. People found cracks on the road, which caused difficulties for driving. Water and electricity were cut off. The water pipes in some buildings cracked and burst and steam burst from holes in the ground. There were disasters everywhere. In a few seconds the whole county was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached 617. Besides, 3143 were injured and a large number of people lost their homes. Soon after the quakes, the army sent soldiers to help the rescue work. They provided food and fresh water and built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed.

【解析】

題目要求根據漢語提示完成作文，提示中提到了地震發(fā)生的時間和地點，地震帶來的災害，地震后的房屋、地面以及建筑物等出現的不同程度的損壞情況都需要包含在文章中。并且有關地震后的傷亡情況和救援情況也需要一一記錄。文章在包含提示的所有內容的同時也可自己適當增加細節(jié)，但注意只能適當添加。最后提示給出了文章有關的生詞，可適當使用。

亮點說明：首先文章將題目要求的所有方面都描述了，文章開頭就直奔主題。其中 “it seemed that the world was at an end”用it做形式主語后接了一個主語從句，后面還用了很多短語如“ fell down.”“cut off”“ in ruins”“a large number of ”等。且文章使用的報道形式，讓人有身臨其境的感覺。

問題說明：整篇文章只有一個自然段，并且只描述文章描述漢語提示中的內容，與其說是作文更像一篇報道，句子過于簡短。

考點：考察報道式應用文寫作。