【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Today, an incident impressed me deep. Mom asked me to buy a bag of flour in a shop running by an elderly couple. On the way, it occurred to them that I had no cash with me.

Then I thought I could pay on it with my phone, so I was afraid that they couldn't receive money by phone. After all, they were nearly 70 year old. They might be so much old that they weren't familiar with online service. To my surprise, when I asked an elderly wife if I could pay by phone, she points to the sign on the wall. She said proudly,“Of course, you can scan it!”I felt happy see our advanced society!

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【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。記敘了作者一次購(gòu)物用手機(jī)支付，擔(dān)心店主夫婦年齡太大無(wú)法用手機(jī)收錢(qián)，結(jié)果可以。作者很高興看到社會(huì)的進(jìn)步。

1.考查副詞。句意：今天，一件事給我留下了深刻的印象。impressed me deeply意為“深深地打動(dòng)了我”。作副詞來(lái)講，deep常用來(lái)表示具體的深度，而deeply常用于抽象意義上的深度，此處意為“深深地、非常”。故deep改為deeply。

2.考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：媽媽讓我去老兩口開(kāi)的商店買(mǎi)一袋面粉。過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)run by an elderly couple作后置定語(yǔ)，并且與a shop形成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故running改為run。

3.考查代詞。句意：在路上，我突然想到我身上沒(méi)帶現(xiàn)金。根據(jù)下文中的關(guān)鍵詞“I”和語(yǔ)境可知，此處指“我”突然想到，故them改為me。

4.考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：然后我想我可以用手機(jī)支付。固定短語(yǔ)pay for sth.意為“支付某物的費(fèi)用”。故on改為for。

5.考查連詞。句意：我認(rèn)為我可以用手機(jī)支付，但是我擔(dān)心他們不會(huì)用手機(jī)收錢(qián)。根據(jù)上下文語(yǔ)境可知為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故so改為but。

6.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：畢竟，他們都快70歲了。year為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)上文70可知此處應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)名詞years。故year改為years。

7考查固定句式。句意：他們可能太老了，不熟悉在線(xiàn)服務(wù)。so…that.…引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，意為“如此……以至于……”，故去掉much。

8.考查冠詞。句意：令我驚訝的是，當(dāng)我問(wèn)老太太我是否可以用手機(jī)付款時(shí)，她指著墻上的牌子。定冠詞the在此處特指文中的elderly wife。故an改為the。

9.考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意同上。因?yàn)槿挠靡话氵^(guò)去時(shí)敘述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，所以此處也應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故points改為pointed。

10.考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：我很高興看到我們先進(jìn)的社會(huì)!不定式短語(yǔ)to see our advanced society在句中作狀語(yǔ)，to不能省略。常用結(jié)構(gòu)be／feel happy to do sth意為“高興做某事”。故happy后添加to。

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