Question

19．假如你是新華中學(xué)的高一學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Tom給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你對高中生活的感受和你對新的一年的打算．請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件．
1．對高中生活的感受；
2．對新的一年的打算（如學(xué)習(xí)，交友，感恩父母等）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
                                       

Answer 1

分析 題目要求根據(jù)要求寫一篇書信要求：1．對高中生活的感受；2．對新的一年的打算（如學(xué)習(xí)交友，感恩父母等）．需要注意的有：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．需要根據(jù)要求寫，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯，并添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)使用了三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)，開門見山，運(yùn)用平常的詞語卻寫的新穎，別致，內(nèi)容豐富．讓人產(chǎn)生聯(lián)想，簡單易懂，雖然不華麗，卻很樸實．沒有過多的空話．文章運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時穿插．用了很多語法知識，運(yùn)用了第一人陳為主的敘述順序．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
It has been half a year since I became a senior one student．（高分句型一）
I'm also fond of the learning environment here，where we can compete and learn from each other．（高分句型二）
What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard，I still find it hard to catch up with my classmates．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
      How is everything going on with you？It has been half a year since I became a senior one student．（高分句型一） I feel it an honor to be a student here，because there are many excellent teachers and outstanding students．I'm also fond of the learning environment here，where we can compete and learn from each other．（高分句型二）What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard，I still find it hard to catch up with my classmates．（高分句型三）I'm especially poor in English，so in the coming new year，I'll study harder．In addition，I'll learn to share housework with my parents who give all their love and care to me．
      I am looking forward to hearing from you．Wish you happy!
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．