Question

6．假設你是李芳．你的美國筆友Susan對中國的清明節(jié)（The Qingming Festival/Tomb Sweeping Day）很感興趣．請你給她寫封e-mail回復，主要內容如下：
1．清明節(jié)在每年的4月4日至6日之間，有2500年的歷史，是祭拜祖先，悼念已逝的親人的日子．
2．人們清掃墓地，除去雜草，把鮮花、食物等物品擺放在親人墓前．
3．清明節(jié)，也是春耕開始和春游等戶外活動的好時候．
注意：
1．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)120詞左右．文章的開頭與結尾已給出，請抄入答題卡內，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Susan，
Since you mentioned your interest in the Qingming Festival，I did some research and have learned a lot about this traditional festival．
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When and how do you pay your respect to your ancestors？Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Fang．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求根據(jù)所給的信息給Susan寫一封電子郵件，介紹中國的清明節(jié)．根據(jù)提示的信息可知，文章應從清明節(jié)的由來、人們在清明節(jié)的活動等幾個方面入手．寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象，適當?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點，使文章內容豐滿，并達到要求的字數(shù)．此外，為了提高文章檔次，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯，并添加關聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢．
【亮點說明】本篇書面表達格式規(guī)范，語言流暢．第一、二段概括了清明節(jié)的歷史；第三段介紹了清明節(jié)在農業(yè)方面的意義；第四段詢問對方如何祭奠祖先．本文的亮點是運用了復雜的句式如定語從句，被動語態(tài)等，提升了文章的檔次；date back、in a way 等結構的運用也為文章增添了亮色．
Qingming Festival，also called the Tomb Sweeping Day，is usually celebrated between April 4 and April 6．（高分句型一）
It's a time for remembering loved ones who have passed away．（高分句型二）
When visiting the tombs of their lost loved ones，people usually sweep away the dirt and get rid of any weeds．（高分句型三）
They also offer varieties of food and flowers in front of the tomb．Some even burn paper money，hoping to keep the ancestors happy，as Chinese believe that the spirits of past ancestors look after the living．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Susan，
      Since you mentioned your interest in the Qingming Festival，I did some research and have learned a lot about this traditional festival．
      Qingming Festival，also called the Tomb Sweeping Day，is usually celebrated between April 4 and April 6．（高分句型一）This festival dates back to 2，500 years ago．It's a time for remembering loved ones who have passed away．（高分句型二）When visiting the tombs of their lost loved ones，people usually sweep away the dirt and get rid of any weeds．（高分句型三）They also offer varieties of food and flowers in front of the tomb．Some even burn paper money，hoping to keep the ancestors happy，as Chinese believe that the spirits of past ancestors look after the living．（高分句型四）
      Qingming Festival also marks the beginning of the planting season and outdoor activities．So，in a way，on this day both life and death are respected．
      When and how do you pay your respect to your ancestors？Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Fang

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．