Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你在布告欄中看到學(xué)校每日早操前將開展“瘋狂英語”集中訓(xùn)練活動，需要招募一位英語資料編輯兼領(lǐng)讀員，請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫信的目的； 2.你的特長； 3.希望被招聘。

注意：

1.總詞數(shù) 100 左右； 2.可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。

DearSirorMadam,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 3. It is noticed that our school is going to start an activity of “Crazy English” before daily morning exercise. I’ve learned that a material editor and person who leads the reading is needed. Interested in it, now I am writing to apply for the post.

Firstly, English is my favorite subject and I have a good command of oral English. Secondly, having gained much experience from oral English competitions, I am sure I am qualified for the job. Thirdly, if given the opportunity, I’ll apply myself to the job, through which I can do something good for others.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本次作文要求李華在布告欄中看到學(xué)校每日早操前將開展“瘋狂英語”集中訓(xùn)練活動，需要招募一位英語資料編輯兼領(lǐng)讀員，根據(jù)要點寫一封自薦信。要點包括：寫信的目的；你的特長；希望被招聘。故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章還運用了賓語從句that our school is going to start an activity of “Crazy English” before daily morning exercise. that a material editor and person who leads the reading is needed.定語從句who leads the reading is needed. which I can do something good for others. apply for，a good command of，qualified for，Looking forward to等詞匯及Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 等連接詞的使用讓文章更流暢。