9．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤．每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改．
增加：把缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改僅限一詞．
      2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Susan，
I'm very glad to hear you are coming to visiting me the next Friday．Unfortunately，I won't be able to
meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon．You won't find it difficultly to get to the
city center．The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you right to the Friendship Hotel．Your
class will be over by then or I will pick you up there．I will took you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and
we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner．Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday．
Yours，
Zhang Ming．

分析 本文主要講述了作者對(duì)于即將來(lái)訪的朋友所做出的安排．因?yàn)楫?dāng)朋友到機(jī)場(chǎng)時(shí)他將正在上課，所以他要朋友直接坐機(jī)場(chǎng)的車(chē)去賓館，然后他上完課后再去賓館接朋友吃飯，在吃飯期間他們可以談?wù)撜務(wù)搶?duì)周末的安排．

解答 Dear Susan，
I'm very glad to hear you are coming to visiting me the next Friday．Unfortunately，I won't be able to
meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon．You won't find it difficultly to get to the
city center．The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and  will take you right to the Friendship Hotel．Your class will be over by then or I will pick you up there．I will took you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and
we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner．Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday．
Yours，
Zhang Ming．
詳解：
1．visiting改為visit 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．此處to是不定式符號(hào)，后接動(dòng)詞原形．
2．去掉the 考查冠詞．此處是以現(xiàn)在為著眼點(diǎn)，next短語(yǔ)前無(wú)冠詞，比如：next year，next term等．
3．a(chǎn)lthough改為because/as 考查連詞．我下午有課是不能去機(jī)場(chǎng)接人的原因，所以前后構(gòu)成因果關(guān)系，故although 改為 because或as．
4．difficulty改為difficult 考查形容詞．在句型find it adj．to do sth．中，it是形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是to do sth．，形容詞作it的賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)．
5．minute改為minutes 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．minute意為"分鐘"，是可數(shù)名詞，其前有數(shù)詞修飾時(shí)要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
6．Your改為My 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：我的課到那時(shí)也結(jié)束了．將your改為my．
7．or改為and 考查代詞．我的課到那時(shí)也結(jié)束了和后面我將去那里接你，前后這兩句是順承關(guān)系，所以把or 改為 and．
8．took改為take 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．will后接動(dòng)詞原形，構(gòu)成一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)．
9．with改為about 考查介詞．talk with意為"與某人交談"，而此處應(yīng)該是談?wù)撚?jì)劃，所以用talk about表示談?wù)摰膬?nèi)容，正確答案是把with改為about．
10．Having改為Have 考查祈使句．see you Friday是個(gè)祈使句，所以and應(yīng)該是連接兩個(gè)句子，故把Having改為 Have，構(gòu)成祈使句．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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