Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

I went to Shanghai Expo on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the past few years. After which, we visited China Pavilion and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 on去掉

 America → American

 him→ them

 travel → travelling  

 busy with去掉with  

 changes后加that/which

 which→ that   

 address→ addresses 

 on → in

 practicing → practice

【解析】本文寫了作者上星期去上海世博會(huì)時(shí)，在門口遇見了幾個(gè)外國(guó)朋友，于是與他們交談起來(lái)。然后作者了解到他們是一些大學(xué)生，到中國(guó)來(lái)旅游。最后，作者與他們交換了電子郵箱，以備以后相互聯(lián)系。

試題分析：

 考查時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)前介詞的用法。last week前不能用介詞。故去掉on。

 考查形容詞作定語(yǔ)的用法。在這里要作定語(yǔ)，修飾tourists，必須用形容詞，American是形容詞，而America是名詞，所以America 必須改成American。

 考查代詞的用法。這里要用來(lái)代替some America tourists，是復(fù)數(shù)，所以要把him改成them。

 考查動(dòng)詞的適當(dāng)形式。they were college students travel in China中的travel是用來(lái)做定語(yǔ)，要用現(xiàn)在分詞，所以travel要改成travelling 。

 考查形容詞詞組。be busy doing sth.或be busy with sth.忙于做某事，所以要去掉with。

 考查定語(yǔ)從句中的關(guān)系代詞。which/that had taken place in the past few years是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，用來(lái)修飾changes。關(guān)系代詞在句中做主語(yǔ)，指代物，用關(guān)系代詞which或that。

 考查連詞。在這里，是要用代詞來(lái)代替前面句子所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，要用that，which一般只能在定語(yǔ)從句中代替先行詞。所以which要變成that 。

 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù).我們的電子郵箱地址，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，所以address要變成addresses 。

 考查介詞搭配問題。in the future在將來(lái)。是固定搭配。所以on要變成in。

 考查動(dòng)詞的適當(dāng)形式。前面有動(dòng)詞不定式符號(hào)to，后面要用動(dòng)詞原形。所以practicing 要變成practice。

考點(diǎn)：考查動(dòng)詞拼寫和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。