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3．假定你是李華，上周末和同學(xué)到家鄉(xiāng)附近的景區(qū)游玩，看到許多令人啼笑皆非的標(biāo)志牌，比如：景區(qū)大門(mén)的"入口"被譯成import；景區(qū)"出口"被譯成export．李華給在美國(guó)的筆友Tom寫(xiě)信尋求幫助，主要內(nèi)容如下：
（1）陳述家鄉(xiāng)景區(qū)英語(yǔ)翻譯的問(wèn)題；
（2）希望今年暑假Tom能再來(lái)中國(guó)，和你一道去景區(qū)糾正英文翻譯．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit．Last Sunday，I paid a visit to one of the scenicspots in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，which reads"import"．（高分句型一）"What does it mean？"I asked myself．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred to"Entrance"．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word"Export"．It was then that I felt obliged to do something about it．（高分句型二）
Given the fact that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．（高分句型三）I'm firmly convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promoting the standard English．（高分句型四）Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun and meaningful．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息給在美國(guó)的筆友Tom寫(xiě)信尋求幫助，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）陳述家鄉(xiāng)景區(qū)英語(yǔ)翻譯的問(wèn)題；（2）希望今年暑假Tom能再來(lái)中國(guó)，和你一道去景區(qū)糾正英文翻譯． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：pay a visit to拜訪(fǎng)；The moment 一…就；refer to 指的是；look forward to盼望；make efforts to不遺余力地去做；
The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，which reads"import"．（高分句型一
It was then that I felt obliged to do something about it．（高分句型二）
Given the fact that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．（高分句型三）
I'm firmly convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promoting the standard English．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Tom，
     How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit．
     Last Sunday，I paid a visit to one of the scenic spots in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，which reads"import"．（高分句型一）"What does it mean？"I asked myself．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred to"Entrance"．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word"Export"．It was then that I felt obliged to do something about it．（高分句型二）
     Given the fact that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．（高分句型三）I'm firmly convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promoting the standard English．（高分句型四）Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun and meaningful．
     Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．