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11．假設(shè)你是李華，福建省某中學(xué)高中學(xué)生，今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為WATER FOR LIFE"的交流活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你以參訪代表的身份，根據(jù)以下圖片提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿．
注意：
1．  根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容適當(dāng)展開(kāi)，以使行文連貫；
2．  開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．  文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
4．  詞數(shù)：120左右
參考詞匯：短缺 shortage； 資源 reaource

Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning，I'm Li Hua from Fujian，China，It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．
Good morning，I'm Li Hua from Fujian，China．It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．
As we know，the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population．Therefore，it's high time we did something about it．
Firstly，an effective way，I think is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use．Secondly，new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources，for example，turning sea water into fresh water．Thirdly，we must stop water pollution by law．Last but not least，it's everyone's responsibility to make good use of water，such as recycling and saving water in our daily life．
In conclusion，people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage，protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically．
                                                                   That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文，采用"圖表+提綱類(lèi)"形式．根據(jù)對(duì)圖片的理解及圖片中的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：提出問(wèn)題（global water shortage）；解決問(wèn)題（reserve water；turning sea water into fresh water；other ways），總結(jié)深化（自己觀點(diǎn)）．既是提綱作文又是圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文．寫(xiě)作時(shí)可按"三段式"來(lái)寫(xiě)，首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，然后分析提出措施，最后闡述觀點(diǎn)．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：deal with…（處理），due to（由于…），sth need to be developed（某事需要被做），turn …into…（把…變成…），make good use of （充分利用），in conclusion（總之），be aware of （意識(shí)到），around the world（全世界）．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
  Good morning，I'm Li Hua from Fujian，China．It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it．（引出話(huà)題）
 As we know，the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population．Therefore，it's high time we did something about it．【高分句型】（提出問(wèn)題）
 Firstly，an effective way，I think is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use．Secondly，new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources，for example，turning sea water into fresh water．【高分句型】Thirdly，we must stop water pollution by law．Last but not least，it's everyone's responsibility to make good use of water，such as recycling and saving water in our daily life．（解決問(wèn)題）
In conclusion，people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage，protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically．（總結(jié)概括）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文要求將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象．如果是記敘文類(lèi)的素材，要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說(shuō)明文或議論文，首先要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫(huà)的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．