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3．科技與生活息息相關(guān)，為我們帶來(lái)快捷便利．請(qǐng)結(jié)合實(shí)際，以"My Technologically-enriched Life"為題，談一談科技如何豐富了你的生活．

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分析 本文屬于議論文寫(xiě)作，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫(xiě)作要求為"結(jié)合實(shí)際，以"My Technologically-enriched Life"為題，談一談科技如何豐富了你的生活"，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要結(jié)合生活中的實(shí)際情況全面闡述科技為我們的生活帶來(lái)的便利．
重要詞匯：decades of （幾十年的）； indulge in（沉溺于）； in a fantastic way（以一種奇妙的方式）； is featured by （以…為特征）；in daily life （在日常生活中）；crowd into（涌入，擠入）；  in addition （另外，此外）；in a word（總之）．
高分句型：1．But now，we have indulged ourselves in a digital world which is full of information and fun．
                 which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為a digital world．
                 2．We can buy everything①we need in our daily life online simply with several clicks and the next day the items ①we buy will be delivered to our door，②which greatly saves the trouble of crowding into the supermarkets and queuing to cash．
                 ①是定語(yǔ)從句，分別修飾everything和the items；②which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代上一句中提到的情況．
                 3．Just open the browser and everything we want to know and don't want to know will automatically come into eyes．
                  主句為everything will automatically come into eyes，we want to know and don't want to know 是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾主語(yǔ)everything．

解答 My Technologically-enriched Life
    Decades of years ago，we didn't have smart phones and pads．But now，we have indulged ourselves in a digital world which is full of information and fun（高分句型一）．I will tell you how technology has changed our life in a fantastic way．
    To begin with，technology has changed our concept of consumption，which is featured by e-business．We can buy everything we need in our daily life online simply with several clicks and the next day the items we buy will be delivered to our door，which greatly saves the trouble of crowding into the supermarkets and queuing to cash（高分句型二）．
    In addition，everyone is better-informed with the rapid spread of information．Just open the browser and everything we want to know and don't want to know will automatically come into eyes（高分句型三）．We watch films online，chat online and live online．It's hard to imagine what life will be like without technology．
    In a word，our life is enriched by great technology from which we definitely benefit a lot．How important technology is to our life!（總結(jié)）

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