Question

假如你是高一學生李華，請根據(jù)以下提示把上周一下午你上體育課的經(jīng)歷寫一封英語信給你的好友王蘭與她分享你的經(jīng)歷和體會。字數(shù)：100左右。
內容要點：（1）時間：上周一下午體育課
（2）過程：上課鈴響后全班同學在操場上集合，然后做了些準備活動(warming-up exercises)，接著聽老師講解并看他示范，我因心情緊張而失敗，老師鼓勵我不灰心，反復練習，終于跳過3米。
（3）體會：只要有恒心(perseverance)就一定能成功
Dear Wang Lan,
I’m writing to tell you one of my unforgettable experiences in my senior school. ____________________
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Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lan,
I’m writing to tell you one of my unforgettable experiences in my senior school. Last Monday afternoon we had a P. E. lesson. Our teacher taught us to practice the long jump. When the bell rang, we gathered on the playground. After warming-up exercises, the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it. Then we followed the teacher and practiced one after another. Soon came my turn, but I felt a bit nervous. Though I failed the first time, my teacher encouraged me not to lose my heart. I kept on practicing. At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.
From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua

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