Question

有一個美國代表團(tuán)想了解你們的英語老師Mr. Moon，請根據(jù)下列提要，寫一篇以＂My Teacher Mr. Moon”短文。
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1.出生于法國，華籍美國人，40歲，活潑，具有幽默感。
2.與其他教師相比，他更注重教學(xué)方法，總想盡各種方法讓他的課生動有趣。
3.鼓勵學(xué)生思考，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生自學(xué)能力。
4.幫助學(xué)生學(xué)會了分析和解決問題。
5.博學(xué)，深受學(xué)生愛戴。
[寫作要求]
只能用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

My Teacher Mr. Moon
Born in France and aged 40, Mr. Moon, an American Chinese, is a lovely teacher with a sense of humor. Compared with other teachers, Mr. Moon pays more attention to his ways of teaching, trying various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In class he always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own. With his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and solve problems. He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

解析試題分析：這是一篇對人物描寫的文章，要點(diǎn)已給出，首先把每個要點(diǎn)翻譯出來，然后把句子組成文章，使用合適的連詞或承接詞使句子之間具有連貫性，使文章讀起來很豐滿。注意句子形式要多樣，用詞要準(zhǔn)確。嚴(yán)格按照寫作要求寫作。
考點(diǎn)：這是一篇說明文。
點(diǎn)評：寫作時首先要仔細(xì)審題，此題要點(diǎn)已給出，寫作時要點(diǎn)一定要全，句子要連貫，此題的要求很特殊，只能用5個句子，所以一定要嚴(yán)格按寫作要求寫。