Question

7．李越是家中的獨生女，為此，生活的一切都由其父母包辦．但是，自高中住校以來，她卻因無法適應(yīng)獨立生活而感到十分苦惱，學(xué)習(xí)也因此受到影響．請根據(jù)這一普遍現(xiàn)象，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文．
你的文章應(yīng)包括下列要點．
1．描述李越的情況；
2．分析這種現(xiàn)象對孩子人生發(fā)展的影響（例舉兩點）
3．你對父母的合理建議（至少兩點）
注意：
1．文章的標題和開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）．
2．詞數(shù)：100-120．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇論述獨生子女獨立生活能力差的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要有：一描述李越的情況；二分析這種現(xiàn)象對孩子人生發(fā)展的影響；三對父母的合理建議．
高分句型：
1．So she has been at a loss，wondering what to do with the new life，which has consequently influenced her study．句子里at a loss 表示"茫然，不知所措"； which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指她不知怎么辦這件事；consequently表示"結(jié)果"．
因此，她不知所措，不知道怎樣處理新的生活，這件事結(jié)果影響到她的學(xué)習(xí)．
2．Obviously，children like Li Yue are lacking in the ability to overcome difficulties in life and thus unable to face challenges in a society of competition 句子里are lacking in 表示"缺乏"；thus 表示"因此"．
很明顯，像李月這樣的孩子缺乏克服生活困難的問題，因此不能夠面對社會生活中的挑戰(zhàn)．

解答 How should parents help children to be independent？
Li Yue is the only child in her family．Her parents have done everything concerned with  her in daily life．However，after attending high school，she has to live in the dorm．So she has been at a loss，wondering what to do with the new life，which has consequently influenced her study．【高分句型一】（描述李越的情況）
   Nowadays，there is a growing concern over the phenomenon．Obviously，children like Li Yue are lacking in the ability to overcome difficulties in life and thus unable to face challenges in a society of competition．【高分句型二】（分析這種現(xiàn)象對孩子人生發(fā)展的影響）
    Therefore，more efforts should be made by parents to help us be independent．To begin  with，parents should provide opportunities for us to deal with our personal affairs．Moreover，they can allow us to participate in school activities．With parents'trust，we will gradually learn to be independent．（對父母的合理建議）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
本文用了許多高中的詞匯，所以使得文章的水平顯得比較高．所以建議學(xué)生在平時寫作時練習(xí)用高級詞匯，這樣在高考時就可以提高作文的等級，這也是評分的一個方面．