Question

你是李華。最近，很多雜志和報(bào)刊都在探討“低碳生活”的理念，你對(duì)此很感興趣。
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提綱，向《未來(lái)生活》報(bào)社專欄“Dear Ann”寫(xiě)一封信，表達(dá)自己對(duì)節(jié)約能源的理解。
1．我們需要適當(dāng)改變我們的行為習(xí)慣
2．我們需要購(gòu)買(mǎi)節(jié)能產(chǎn)品，減少使用時(shí)間
3、我們要多種樹(shù)，降低溫室氣體對(duì)大氣的影響
4．樹(shù)木能吸收二氧化碳，有助抵消汽車(chē)尾氣
5．我們要養(yǎng)成隨手關(guān)燈的習(xí)慣；降低能源浪費(fèi)
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)算在5個(gè)句子之內(nèi)
3．參考詞匯：carbon dioxide二氧化碳  atmosphere大氣
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Dear Ann,
I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on what we can do to save energy for a better future.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　                  
In short, if everyone cares about our earth, our efforts will make a difference.
Best wishes
Li Hua(請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙上作答)

Answer 1

Dear Ann,
I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on what we can do to save energy for a better future.
If we want to save energy then we need to change the way we behave. On the one hand, we need to buy appliances that are more energy efficient and limit the amount of time we use them. On the other hand, to reduce the effect the greenhouse gases have on our atmosphere, we should plant more trees. As we all know, trees can absorb carbon dioxide and so they help to counter the smoke produced by our cars. What we may also do is to turn off lights even for a few minutes, for good habits can contribute to reducing the negative effects of waste.
In short, if everyone cares about our earth, our efforts will make a difference.
Best wishes
Li Hua

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