Question

【題目】假如你是李華、你在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些困惑，希望通過署期學(xué)習(xí)取得更大進(jìn)步，請給你的外教John寫封郵件，詢問以下內(nèi)容。

內(nèi)容：

1. 暑期英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議；

2. 下學(xué)期的學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I am Li Hua, a student in your class. You always impress us deeply with your passionate and enthusiastic teaching style and remain one of the favorite teachers in many students’ hearts. Therefore, with the intention of making some improvement in my English, I am writing to enquire of you how I can make the most of my summer vacation.

To begin with, despite many years’ learning of English, I still feel puzzled in some aspects, for instance, writing. I always find myself trapped in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express, that is to say, I can’t think directly in English. With regard to this point, do you have some constructive suggestions to make? Then, my grade of the final exam makes it plain that I am left behind by the majority of my classmates, so would you please give me some advice on English learning so that I can catch up with them next term? Lastly, to make some preparation in advance, I also want to know what is generally covered in your class next term.

I would feel obliged if you can point out a way for my English learning. Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題本文是篇提綱類作文，材料簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，要點分三部分來寫：1、描述英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難；2、尋求暑期英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議；3、詢問下學(xué)期的學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容。文章要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和第一人稱來寫，另外要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，還應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的得分檔次。

【亮點說明】文中使用了不少高級短語和句子，為文章增色不少，比如I would feel obliged if you can…，impress… with …, enquire of sb. …等句型，定語從句… in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express...等等; 并注意了句子的銜接如：that is to say, …, To begin with，…Then，… Lastly,… 等等，增強(qiáng)了文章的高級感和緊湊感。