Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線（____），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。

Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. A woman tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum(流浪漢)in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉so

【2】her—him

【3】say—said

【4】in后面加the

【5】passing—passed

【6】he后面加was

【7】immediate—immediately

【8】or—and

【9】mile—miles

【10】in—with

【解析】

【1】去掉so 考查連詞。因為他不想付錢，所以躲在廁所里面，前面有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，后面是主句，去掉so

【2】her—him 考查代詞。文章的開始說的是a man一位男士

【3】say—said 考查動詞的時態(tài)。文章第一句是once曾經(jīng)，由此可知是過去的事情

【4】in后面加the 考查冠詞。這里是指公交車上的廁所，所以應(yīng)為特指。in后面加the

【5】passing—passed 考查動詞的語態(tài)。這里是指消息被傳遞，故應(yīng)用動詞的被動語態(tài)，被傳遞的意思

【6】he后面加was 考查被動語態(tài)。公共汽車司機被告知車上有個炸彈。表示被動含義

【7】immediate—immediately 考查副詞。本句中是用來修飾動詞stop的，修飾動詞應(yīng)用副詞

【8】or—and 考查連詞。告訴乘客下車并且要離車遠一點兒，是順承關(guān)系

【9】mile—miles 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。15 miles應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，mile—miles

【10】in—with 考查固定短語。在某人的幫助下，短語為with the help of="with" one’s help

考點 ：短文改錯。