分析 看圖作文是以圖畫來提供目的、對象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等場景,要求作者借助圖畫,通過聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式,用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容,從寫作體裁上看,可說明介紹,可敘事記人,可寫景狀物,也可以發(fā)表議論.
亮點(diǎn)句型一:we found that an American boy,Dorian,was suffering from cancer,and his wish was to see someone holding his name and taking photos on the Great Wall我們發(fā)現(xiàn),一個(gè)美國男孩,多利安,患有癌癥,他的愿望是看到有人持有他的名字,并在長城拍照.這是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,從句中還運(yùn)用了see sb doing sth的賓補(bǔ)結(jié)構(gòu).
亮點(diǎn)句型二:Holding the poster,we took many photos.本句中用現(xiàn)在分詞holding 在句中做伴隨狀語.
解答 A few days ago,when we surfed the Internet,we found that an American boy,Dorian,was suffering from cancer,and his wish was to see someone holding his name and taking photos on the Great Wall.(亮點(diǎn)句型一)Then we decided to help him realize his dream.Last weekend,we made a poster with"D-Strong"written on it.The next day we came to the Great Wall.Holding the poster,we took many photos.(亮點(diǎn)句型二)We hope that Dorian can feel our love and become optimistic.In the evening,we sent him the photos along with our regards.We also posted the story on WeChat Moments to call on more people join in the relay of love and support.I hope Dorian will live the rest of his life to the fullest.
點(diǎn)評 這是一篇開放式作文,也是看圖作文,認(rèn)真讀圖,可知圖畫反映了人們對待同樣問題的不同看法,寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文.需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,一定要契合給出的開頭,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.
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